“When the Signal Turns Red” by Jayanand Ukey is a modern-day love story. The main characters, Girish & Prajakta have been together for 4 years and are about to be engaged. With their engineering degrees and job offers from prestigious Indian companies, they seem to be set for a bright and happy future. Unfortunately, before their engagement, both Girish & Prajakta’s job offers are rescinded due to the slowing economy. This puts a dent in their happily ever after, mainly in the form of Prajakta’s father who refuses to marry his daughter to someone without a steady income.
The book would have been an enjoyable read despite the generic plot, if not for the following reasons. The topmost being the mediocre writing and the dialogues which were labored, unoriginal; and lacked wit or humor. There was no natural flow to the story. In fact the same scenes are repeated so often, I felt I was reading a very badly written version of the Groundhog Day. There wasn’t a single sentence in the book that made me feel like the book was worth my time.
Sometimes the saving grace for a book with bad writing and a generic plot can be well etched characters. People in the book who incite emotion in the reader, it could be love, hate, curiosity anything but indifference. The characters in this book though were completely flat. There wasn’t an adequate physical description of any of the characters, the back stories for all of them were thin and uninteresting, and all the characters lacked depth or dimension. It was impossible to make any emotional connection to Girish or Prajakta or anyone else in the book. It became a chore just to finish the book despite the short length.
By the time the climax came around, I thought it was impossible for me to be any more disappointed with this story but I was wrong. The way the problem of the loss of Girish’s job was resolved, the way the new man favored by Prajakta’s father is taken out of the picture, all of it just brought home the staleness and lack of imagination evident in every aspect of this story.
I would not recommend this book unless you are stranded on a deserted island and this is the only available entertainment, maybe not even then.
(Note- A free copy of this book was received from the author for this review)